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the final war

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It started with two brothers; the youngest one Damian was sick and dying, the oldest was Gabriel. They always fought and Gabriel always won the fight. The youngest was getting sicker as the years went by. Damian just wanted the war to end the fighting to stop. He was tired of it but knew better then to let his brother get the better of him. So he kept fighting. Their parents didn't stop the fighting. When they got to high school it was worse than in the other schools. They started to fight in school one day that carried over to the car ride home .Damian drove the car as Gabriel yelled at him from the passenger seat.



"What is the matter with you Gabriel? Why are you acting like this? Haven't you ever been weird?" when Gabriel said nothing he yelled louder. "Dammit Gabriel answer me!"



"What Damien? What do you want from me? Do you want me to tell you I am afraid you're gonna die soon? Do you want me to say I don't want to lose you? Do you want me to say I would kill myself when you died?" Damien looked shocked. "I don't want you to die Damien. I really don't and I do plan that once u die I will go with you. I can't be without you. We're twins man. And I don't plan on letting death separate us."



Damien gasped. "Oh Gabriel. You can't do that. This world needs you. Who else would carry on our family name? you need to do so much for us. You need to make sure that there is a next generation to keep our name going. Promise me that Gabriel." He shook his head. "Gabriel I mean it, promise, make it my dying wish."



Gabriel sighed. "Fine, but one day I will kick your ass for making me do this." They got home and went to their rooms. Gabriel thought of what he promised his brother and punched a pillow. Damien cried at what Gabriel had told him. He sighed and laid on his bed as he coughed.
this is a short story about two brothers i came up with the idea and my sister elvira-tepes wrote it.i just did the idea and gave it to her to write.since shes better at writing than me.
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ElviraTepes's avatar
how is it ur entry? i wrote it for you!!!!